Thursday, January 24, 2008

3 point expository paragraph







Topic: My top 3 favorite historic battles




I have several battles that I like a lot. These are Stalingrad, the Battle of the Bulge, and the Fall of Berlin . My third favorite battle is the Fall of Berlin. This battle is Russia versus Germany. I think this was Russia's greatest battle. At the same time of the Fall of Berlin, the Battle of the Bulge was going on. This was part of the reason Russia won. These battles were the first of a long failing streak for Germany. Another reason Russia won was because Hitler killed himself. Next, is the Battle of the Bulge between USA and Germany. USA started to push Germany back, when they fell, they really started to put up a fight. They surrounded USA troops in a city but it did not last long. USA called in some bombers to take them out and it worked. Last, but not least, Stalingrad. This battle has to be the most famous battle in World War ll. Germany started very strong, and no wonder, they had the best tank in the world (the Tiger Tank.) They really started to push Russia back. Hitler was packing his bags to go to Stalingrad but his plane was cancelled because Russia was able to some how come back and demolish Germany. These battles greatly affected our world's history.

3 comments:

Nicole said...

This is great =]
Keep up the good work!

Anonymous said...

Very descriptive. I understood the battles well. Good Job!

Marlene said...

Discriptive! I enjoyed hearing about the battles and I understood your point. Good Job!