Thursday, January 24, 2008

3 point persuasive paragraph (especially for my auntie Jax)


Topic: Why parents need to take their kids skiing




I have three reasons why parents should take their kids skiing. These reasons are, skiing is fun, learning balance, and it is a good family trip.

My first reason is skiing is fun. My mom and dad have allowed me to learn how to ski. Ever since I started it has been a lot of fun for me. Something fun about skiing is races. My second reason kids should learn to ski is they get to learn a lot about balance. Skiing is a lot about balance. If you don't have good balance, you will have a hard time learning to ski . Skiing will be a good way to learn how to balance. My third reason is it is a good family outing. Family outings are good for your family because you get to learn a lot more about them.

In conclusion, I think all families should go skiing. Skiing is very fun and important.




(This was written for my Auntie Jax because I want her and Uncle B and Blake to come to Idaho and ski with us.)

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Collin, I think it is a great idea for you to have a blog! I like your paragraph on skiing. After school today, I am going to get Thomas to read your blog and send you a comment! Love, Mrs. Carol

Anonymous said...

Hey Big C!! You are AWESOME!!! I am SO PROUD of you for ALL your accomplishments...can't believe you're about to be 11??!!! You're as smart as a 20 yr old - or smarter!! - and you are a wonderful role-model to so many kids - and adults too!!! We have been talking about what sport to let Blake start with. Do you think Soccer or T-Ball? I think those are the 1st to start with....keep in mind, he's still 4 1/2. We want to come visit and go skiing with you so bad! We MIGHT even be able to come in May - is there plenty of snow left in the middle of May to go skiiing? Sure hope so.....Once we decide when we can come out, we'll give you a call....You know, I haven't been skiing since I was a senior in High School.....and DON'T count the years....you'll lose count ... ha ha ha ha - it was just a long time ago......Lots & Lots of love to you!~ Keep up your great schoolwork and this blog! Luv U, Auntie Jax